24 Hour flash fiction posting: Epiphany

Hello

here's an experimental flash fiction piece I wrote, inspired by the word "Epiphany". It's not done, but it's close. I appreciate your thoughts and comments!


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  1. TammyMay 5, 2012 at 6:52 PM

    This is excellent. I like the tension and the build up in this piece. Excellent! ~tswallow

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  2. Justin W. PriceMay 5, 2012 at 7:04 PM

    Thanks so much Tammy. I appreciate your read and your feedback!

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